The
countryside was bare as a priest's tonsured scalp. Once again Sofia
sat in the backseat of a long black car rumbling down the Iron Road
to Rassian, but this time it was with an army at her back. The
ladies and lords of the Hornea, Brightwater, Welker, Gross, Anchor,
and Brahm were all shut up in their castles with what men Laurent had
left them. Most of the wealth and arms of the lands around the
capital were now nestled in Rassian's bosom, along with the lion's
share of the autumn crop. Between that harvest and a constant stream
of grain and beef from the Rhydderlands in the south Laurent could
sit on his ass until summer without fear of plague or famine in his
city.
The
snow was melting. Even at night meltwater flowed fast in the ditches
beside the road and cascaded down the rolling hills in makeshift
streams that would dry up and die in summer. The moon was full and
washed the fertile countryside in argent light. The legions left
churned earth and stubbled fields in their wake as they marched west
to buy a fleet.
The
baby kicked and Sofia's stomach roiled. She had reports to go over,
clipboards stuffed with messages from her uncle's spies, from
Kazimir's, from quartermasters and legion tribunes. Lord Rhovan's
legions were embattled at Cold Fords but had both guns and numbers to
their advantage. The rail lines running from the Empire's northern
half to Rassian had been cut, the bridges dynamited so that the only
way in was through the gates or the harbor. This war will bury me
in paper. She set the reports
on the seat and pinched the bridge of her nose. Her gown was tight
and her swollen breasts had been tender since the morning sickness
started; it made for frequent headaches.
Sieur Magnus, seated opposite her, looked up. “Are you well,
Highness?”
Am
I well? I'm losing a war I haven't started and my child is
determined to transform me into some sort of dairy cow. “It's
nothing, Magnus. I'm anxious to see the night's business done.”
“Lord Norman is a snake,” Sieur Magnus said reassuringly, “but
we have his back to the sea. His ships will be yours.”
Gull's
Folly, the seat of House Daguerre, was the westernmost of all the
Hornea's great fortifications. It was a plain, stark place, a square
tower with foundations hacked from the granite and basalt of the
seaward cliffs. Its pilings stretched down to the dark, wild surf
where the lights of Lord Norman's battle fleet rocked at anchor.
Stepping from her car Sofia thought that the armada looked like a
city, all buildings moored loosely one to another and subject to the
sea's ruinous whims. A hundred ships. Two hundred. Enough
to break Laurent ?
Sieur
Magnus, Sieur Enri, and Sieur Jayne walked with Sofia toward the
lighted tower. In her headpiece of gold filigree and trailing dress
of midnight silk, its train embroidered with leviathans rampant,
Sofia knew she looked her part. Still her palms were damp with
perspiration. Daguerre's black cormorant on blue flew from a hundred
flagpoles hammered into the naked stone along the path and at the
gates men waited to admit them. Lord Norman's steward, a dour
Rhyddish woman all in mourning blue with her Lord's cormorant
tattooed on her wrinkled brow.
Sofia held out her hand. The woman kissed it.
“Take me to him.”
The climb to Lord Norman's apartments was a steep one. Sofia
counted two hundred steps before they came to a landing with a
seaward window on the left and a stout oaken door on the right. She
took a moment to catch her breath before waving to the steward to
admit them. The old woman opened the door on a long, low-ceilinged
room forested with plain-cut beams of cedar. At a dining table sat a
long-faced man with a head of thinning grey hair and a great
red-veined beak of a nose. He wore a plain silk dressing gown and a
stained undershirt. “Your majesty,” he said, looking up from his
newspaper and his bowl of fruit and yogurt.
“Lord
Norman.” Sofia took the seat at the table's end as her knights
took up positions by the door. Mistrust radiated from Sieur Magnus
like heat from sun-warmed pavement. I don't trust him
either, but I have no choice.
Norman Daguerre folded his paper and set it aside. He produced a
silver cigarette holder, extracted a cigarette, and lit it. “You
want my fleet.” Smoke trickled from his hairy nostrils. He
scooped up a spoonful of peaches and yogurt and, holding his
cigarette between the first two fingers of his right hand, ate. “One
hundred and sixty-six ships.”
Sofia clasped her hands in her lap as the baby kicked again. She
hoped the dress Lord Kazimir's tailors had sewed for her hid her
rounded stomach well enough. “I am your Queen.”
Lord
Norman took a long drag on his cigarette. “What of it? I have a
telegram from Rassian saying there's a king wants my ships as well.
He'll pay, too, though that part's what we call a silent
understanding.” He spoke the
last words in a stage whisper. “So why should you get them?”
“It is your duty, Dominus. You served my grandmother-”
“Duty!” Lord Norman threw up his hands as if to ward off evil.
“If I started doing my duty now, then where would I be tomorrow? I
fought for Ysandre because I thought she'd win, and when the war was
at an end and I knew I'd laid my bets like a fool I hurried off to
Rassian to bend my knee to old Hanley. You'll need a better reason
than duty if I'm to send my men off to die with you.”
Sofia
leaned back in her seat and let her Eye fall just the slightest bit
open. At once the hundreds of minds within the tower assaulted her
with their clamor, but she shoved them aside and focused her scrutiny
on Norman. The knot in her stomach loosened as she probed the edges
of the nobleman's mind. He would be trained against succumbing to a
seer's influence, but she could still sound out his thoughts in
safety. With a flicker of surprise she came upon herself seen
through his eyes, a silly girl playing games with knights and cannon.
Very well, let's change the game.
“Laurent
is a fool.” She took her headpiece off. Her oiled hair slid out
of its elegant knot and fell around her shoulders. “Give him your
fleet and he'll take your oath for a year, maybe two, before his
mother tells him you're plotting against him, or else he suspects it
himself, and what's worse is that you will be
plotting against him.” She reached back and loosened the satin
ribbons binding her bodice. Dead God, that feels good.
“So he'll have your head if he's feeling impatient, and if he's in
a patient mood you'll rot in a dungeon less your hands, your tongue,
your feet and most likely your cock.”
“A frightening tale,” said Lord Norman, looking thoroughly
un-frightened.
“No,” said Sofia, shaking her head. “The frightening part is
what happens when he's bored with you and you go down to the harbor
to board a ship bound for heaven.”
He stubbed his cigarette out in his half-eaten bowl of yogurt. “The
same heaven you would topple. You're an ambitious one.”
“I wouldn't be here otherwise.” She stood, knowing she gave
Lord Norman a brief glimpse of her breasts. “I'd be in a ditch
beside the Iron Road, where the Throne tried to put me.
“I'll require your answer by sunrise.” She turned to go.
“Exclusive fishing rights for the eastern coast, a one percent
stake in all Rassian-based businesses and Imperial initiatives, the
patronage of the Imperial Navy at my shipyards, primacy in the
provinces of the Hornea and the exile of every living member of House
Brightwater with their lands and titles ceded to my family, my son
Nathan to assume governance of those lands at once, a one-time cash
payment of six million marks, the marriage of your firstborn to one
of my own children of fitting age, and...oh, let us say the
restoration of my right to whale in northern waters.”
Sofia looked back at Lord Norman. He had lit another cigarette and
was slumped indolently in his seat, his skinny legs crossed, his
hands on his belly.
“Is that all?”
“Yes,” he said, smiling, “that should do it. Just.”
She closed her Eye. “Then consider it done, Lord Governor.”
In
the shadow of Gull's Folly the legions were pitching camp. From the
tower gates it seemed a river of men and machinery stretched back
along the road, miles and miles of violence coiled up like a fist.
Sofia inhaled deeply. She'd given Lord Norman enough to ensure that
if the war tipped in her favor House Daguerre would rest comfortably
on the spoils for a century. That Lord Norman had sons and had not
so much as breathed the word “marriage” spoke volumes of his
confidence in her achieving that outcome. What will he do
if I fail? Fall to the floor and grovel, pleading that he was forced
into treason by sorcery? She
started down the banner-lined track toward the camp's outskirts. She
had to piss, an occurrence now so common it no longer even irritated
her.
Sieur Magnus fell in at her side like a gigantic bald raven. “You
did well, highness.”
Sofia pulled a sour face. “I gave him everything but my
underclothes.”
“You needed his ships, highness.” Magnus looked distinctly
uncomfortable. “The northern fleet is small and outdated, and
Leviathan Bay is strongly defended.”
The
council tent was abandoned except for Lord Kazimir and the dwarf,
Tilly Lemure. She had come south with her brothers and even wore a
soldier's uniform in miniature, Lemure's water strider stitched on
the collar. Seated on a high stool she perused a welter of dusty
maps and troop movement reports. What a strange little
woman, Sofia thought as she left
Magnus and Enri and slipped through the tent flap into the musty murk
of the tent.
“Your majesty.” Tilly looked up from her study of the maps.
“Lord Norman is with us?”
“He is,” Sofia said. She sat down at the table's head and
dipped her hands in a silver ewer set out for departed diners. Sieur
Jayne brought a towel for her to dry them on. “Once we meet Lord
Rhovan we will be ready to take the capital.”
The little red-haired woman had proven herself useful time and time
again. She'd plotted courses for their long and troop-burdened
advance, advised the quartermasters in planning their camps and even
set with deft brilliance supply lines that kept even the poor fruits
of the marshland provinces flowing quick and undetected across the
breadth of the Hornea. Talia frowned down at a map of Rassian and
its countryside. “My brothers say I should return to our fortress
at Blackwater Pool.”
“War's a game,” Sofia said. She took a cigarette from a little
brass dish on the table and lit it. “Men like to pretend they're
best at it, to keep us away from the swords.” She felt cruel,
rebellious, and bold. Beside her Sieur Jayne, who had earned her own
knighthood driving the Umzadi from the coast, flashed a crooked
smile.
The dwarf's oversized brow wrinkled. “Will you be on the
battlefield, your majesty?”
“Yes.” Though Sieur Magnus had spent hours trying to convince
her otherwise. “I'll command from the deck of Lord Norman's
Masquerade.”
“I've read accounts.” The girl deftly rolled the map and
returned it to its leather tube. Her face was pale. “I've never
been in a battle, though.”
“Neither have I.” It felt strange to admit it when every day
was spent playing the Queen, the Empress, the grand commander. The
last woman of House Rassianus to take the field had been Queen
Valeria the Wrathful, Lysander's youngest daughter who had seen nine
of her brothers and sisters buried within the palace walls before
herself rising to the throne. It had been she who finished her
father's bloody work, bringing the Broken Isle, the Rhydderlands and
the deep south of Artaxas into the imperial fold with two decades of
brutal war.
“I think I'll stay, then.” Tilly climbed down from her
stool and curtsied before leaving the pavilion. As the flaps parted
Sofia glimpsed for an instant the lights of her new fleet rocking
gently on the black waters of the bay. She watched the ships for a
long, cold while and thought of Rassian. What would she do once
she'd taken it? Bigger wheels than me are spinning. I have to be
prepared.
“Highness?” Magnus, still standing like a pillar beside the
tent's entrance, looked at her. “Do you need anything?”
A wave of nausea swept over Sofia, a tidal swell of it. Her
stomach, now noticeably rounded, clenched and roiled. She looked up
at the night. “No.”
First of all, I like Lord Norman. I hope he comes back. It might not even hurt to punch him up an extra notch, play up his quirks and theatrical tendencies. His little speech about duty is very effective, too.
ReplyDeleteThe moment when Sofia sees herself as Lord Norman does...I want more from that. Perhaps Norman's feelings and impressions, or something more striking. It's a good idea, but I wanted a bit more.
"The ladies and lords of the Hornea, Brightwater, Welker, Gross, Anchor, and Brahm..."
I think you want a colon or semicolon after Hornea, since thereafter is a list of the houses of the Hornea region.
"Lord Norman's steward, a dour Rhyddish woman all in mourning blue with her Lord's cormorant tattooed on her wrinkled brow."
Not a complete thought.
Sofia thinks about how Norman did not demand a marriage, but he did.
"...and even set with deft brilliance supply lines that kept even the poor fruits..."
'Even' is used twice in a row.
I like this chapter, but I feel like Sofia is too ready to accept Norman's ridiculous proposal. Granted she does need his ships, but perhaps she could give him a counteroffer, or think about how high the cost is.
1: You're right. Been polishing it to make him more ecstatic.
ReplyDelete2: Gonna develop it.
grammatical, thought, yes.
3: I remedied what I meant.
4: yep
5: He kind of has her over a barrel.