Chapter
13: Negotiations
“Are
we ready?” Nucleon glanced at his watch again, confirming what he
already knew. They were right on schedule.
“Yes,”
Professor Portal said. “Still ready.” He bobbed up and down on
the balls of his feet, twiddling his fingers. Nucleon ignored him.
Behind them, Brainwave lounged against the concrete walls of the
small room and stifled a yawn behind his long hands. They were in a
cell in the depths of Professor Portal's base. The room had no
windows, just bare grey walls and a blank door. The only thing in
the room was a metal chair.
“Well,
then let's get on with it. We only have a small window.”
“Patience,”
Nucleon said. “We must be precise.” This, of course, assumed
that the schedule Charles had leaked to them was accurate. If not,
they would have to improvise, and fast. “Now.”
Professor
Portal reached out in front of him and tore the air apart. Distant
light warmed the room, and Nucleon caught a glimpse of a backstage
somewhere, dark curtains and narrow spaces illuminated by the light
beyond. Blocking the light was the dark silhouette of a man.
Professor Portal reached through space, grabbed onto the man's
shoulders, and pulled him through the opening. The portal snapped
shut as Senator Alan sprawled out on the cell floor. He looked
around wildly, his broad face filled with confusion and panic. Then
he laid eyes on Nucleon, and hissed, “You!”
“Good
evening, senator,” Nucleon said.
Alan
scrambled to his feet, which took a few seconds, and tried to retreat
away from Nucleon, but the room was small and there was nowhere to
go. He looked around and saw the other Metahumans.
“Sit,”
Brainwave said, gesturing to the chair.
Senator
Alan thrust his jaw out, scowling. “I will not,” he said.
“Sit,”
Brainwave said, eyes flashing, and he pushed Alan back into the
chair. Alan sat. “Your phone, please. Can't have anyone find out
where you are.” Alan handed over his cell phone without question,
and Brainwave pocketed it. The telepath closed his eyes for a
moment. “He's clean. And he's due onstage in ten minutes.”
Brainwave released his mental hold on Alan and leaned back against
the wall.
“How
the hell did you find me?” Alan asked. “My location was secret.
The entire event was.”
“Please,”
Brainwave said. “Do you think the comings and goings of so many
politicians and Metahumans could be kept completely
secret? We had certain ways of finding out.” He smiled
cryptically.
Alan
swallowed. “So. What are you loonies going to do to me now, eh?”
He gripped the arms of the chair and glanced around the room.
“There's
no way out,” Professor Portal informed him. “I've made sure of
that.”
“I
thought, senator,” Nucleon said, hunkering down to Alan's level,
“that we could have a little chat.”
“Not
with you, I won't,” Alan said. “Not with any of you.”
“Your
other option is to sit here for several boring minutes. Eventually
I'll have Brainwave program you the way I want or tear the
information out of your head, but neither of us want that. I'd
rather we reach a compromise together.” Nucleon shrugged. “It's
up to you.”
Alan's
small eyes looked between the three gathered Metahumans. Then he
said, “Say what you want.”
“You
recently spoke before congress about rolling back Metahuman rights.
Specifically, about undoing the changes I made.”
Alan
laughed, a single humorless bark. “So you want me to take that
back. You want me to say that I've changed my mind and that you're
no threat at all.”
“My
God, he's good,”
Brainwave mused.
“I'll
never do it. You people are threats. You're weapons, and you're
meant to be used by those that can control you.” He pointed a
finger at Nucleon. “You're dangerous, and you can't be
controlled.”
Nucleon
felt a twinge in his chest. He knew what he was. He knew what he
was capable of. The memories of Rushmore's cancer came back to the
surface. The fate of all his allies, in the end. What sick joke of
nature had decided that a man should wield one of the most
destructive powers on earth? Nucleon thought, or liked to think,
that he'd never been irresponsible with his powers, but it was a thin
line he walked.
Then
again, as the twisted children of the atom bomb, perhaps his powers
made the most sense of all.
“I
think that decision should be made by those with the power to make
it,” Nucleon said, ignoring Senator Alan's piercing remark. “An
I intend to make them see that my point of view is correct.”
“You'll
force your views on them?” Alan said.
“No
more than you would. But in this case, you'll do the persuading for
me.”
Alan
laughed again, longer this time. Professor Portal rolled his eyes
and tapped his fingers against his folded arms. When Alan spoke, he
said, “You're not serious.”
“Why
not? It's perfect. Who in Washington is more in support of the war
than you? You're the biggest proponent of the MPA. Always have
been.” Knowing what Alan had seen, Nucleon found it a little hard
to blame him. Majesticus and Nucleon had been sent in to take down
the Mentalist themselves. They'd both been rookies then, only a year
or two out of training. Looking back, Nucleon still found it hard to
believe that they'd managed to take down a psychic as powerful as the
Mentalist. “If you were to change your opinions and begin speaking
out against it, then people would fall in line behind you.”
“First,”
Alan said, “I'm not going along with you. Second, people won't
support me. They'll think I've gone nuts. Someone else will take my
place and nothing will be different. So no dice.”
“They
will follow you,” Nucleon said. He stood, grunting as his bones
protested. “I'll tell you why.” He began to pace around the
small room, keeping his eyes on Senator Alan the whole time. The man
had settled into his chair, almost as if it were a throne, following
Nucleon's movements across the cell. “You're the head of the
Subcommittee of Superhero Logistics. You work directly with
Secretary Chapman, a pushover if I ever saw one.” Alan made a
noise, which Nucleon chose to interpret as agreement. “You have
the president's ear.” Not that Lynch would be an easy sell on
this, but it could be useful. “You work with countless lobbyists.
Your radical change of opinion will be talked about, by congressmen
and Washington insiders and people everywhere. I'm sure you'll be
interviewed extensively about it. And you're a very persuasive man.
Your new opinions will spread around Washington and the country and
people will fall in
line. So when it becomes time to propose these changes to the Senate
and President Lynch, they'll all be ready to repeal the Metahuman
Police Act and grant us our freedom.” Brainwave started a slow
clap. “What do you say, senator?”
Alan
unbuttoned his jacket and adjusted himself in his seat. “You still
haven't given me a reason to do all this. Nothing you say will
persuade me. Nothing.”
“We
could just kill him,” Brainwave suggested.
“You
know we can't do that,” Nucleon said. It would be the Thunderman
situation all over again. Likely worse. Granted, the thought of
Alan's corpse tumbling from a portal onto the podium in front of a
giant crowd did have massive appeal, but that happy moment would have
to wait. He turned to face Alan. The world would benefit from the
man's death. Greedy, intolerant, intolerable. Pockets lined with
money from corrupt fat cats and anti-Metahuman lobbyists. It would
be simple to kill him. But he could be used alive. “You are aware
of what we can do, senator. The three of us in this room could
destroy any location in America in no time at all. But we haven't.
We haven't because I do not crave the destruction of this country. I
want to improve it.
“You
will agree to what I have proposed to you. Because if you don't, I
won't hold back.” Nucleon allowed himself a smile. “You recall
the Metahuman who called herself the Mentalist. You remember what
she did to Miami and your home state. That was one Metahuman.
Imagine what all of my supporters could do if we were to descend on
Florida together.”
Time
for drama. Nucleon spread his hands and let his eyes glow, green in
the dim light of the room. He let low levels of energy pour off of
him, microwaves and a narrow spectrum of visible light.
“Now
you make idle threats to the entire country,” Alan said, but he
looked pale. Beads of sweat stood out on his forehead, prominent in
the cold light pouring off of Nucleon. “You expect me to surrender
now?”
Nucleon
let the light fade. “Do what you want. But if you deviate from
what I've proposed, or if you let slip what happened here, we will
attack. We will descend on your state and reduce it to nothing. It
will be easy. And all that death and destruction will be on your
shoulders, Spencer Alan. We will make sure the world knows it. They
will know that this is because you stood in the way of progress and
Metahuman rights.” He leaned down close to Alan. The senator
inched backwards in his chair. “Do we have a deal?”
He
prayed that Alan wouldn't call his bluff. The last thing Nucleon
wanted was wanton destruction. He would be proving exactly what
people thought about him. But it was an effective bargaining chip to
use against the man.
Alan
adjusted himself in his chair. He patted his forehead with a
handkerchief, unbuttoned his jacket. He looked at his watch. “Tick
tock,” said Brainwave, tapping his wrist.
“There's
really only one decision you can make here,” Professor Portal said.
“Be pragmatic, senator.”
Nucleon
folded his arms and tried to not to look anxious. Alan could decide
on nothing. He could refuse them everything and what could they do
about it?
Alan
looked up at Nucleon and finally spoke. “You'll give me
protection,” he said in a clear voice. “No matter what you do or
plan, I'll be safe. Me, and my family.” Nucleon nodded. “You'll
leave my state alone. I hold up my end, and you don't touch
Florida.”
“Yes,
yes,” Brainwave said, all but rolling his eyes.
“You
will give me time to prepare my answers to the public. You'll leave
me the hell alone after this. And him.” He pointed at Brainwave.
“You'll keep him out of my head.”
Brainwave's
lips pulled back. “You're not in position to make terms,” he
snarled.
“He'll
stay out,” Nucleon said. “But we'll be keeping a close eye on
you.” He paused, waiting for Alan to say more. “So. Are we
agreed?” He held out his hand. Alan glanced at it, and Nucleon
knew what the man was thinking. The same thing everyone had thought
since the Rushmore incident. But Alan shook, briefly. “Nice doing
business with you, senator.”
Alan
stood and buttoned his jacket with one hand. “Get me out of here.”
“Of
course,” said Brainwave. “You're due to speak any minute now.
Brainwave, the senator's phone?”
Brainwave
handed Alan back his phone, Professor Portal did his thing, and
Senator Alan stepped through the wormhole back into Washington.
“Will he do it?” Professor Portal asked the moment space had
restored itself.
“At
least for now,” Brainwave said. “He's intimidated. Time will
tell if it holds, but for now, we've got him.” The three of them
walked out of the cell and took the stairs up into the secret base.
“You should have let me get into his head,” Brainwave said to
Nucleon as they entered the control room. “It's the easiest way to
keep track of him.”
“I
won't risk Majesticus finding out,” Nucleon said. “He'd notice
if you were poking around in Senator Alan's mind, trust me. Eliot
could always tell.” How much easier things would be if Majesticus
had joined their cause. At least then there would be someone Nucleon
could trust entirely on his damn team.
Professor
Portal switched on the monitors and communicators. Charles
Ramanujan's eager face appeared on the screen. “Did it work?” he
asked.
“Indeed,”
Nucleon said. “Alan will back off. We've got him on a short
leash.”
“Wonderful
news.” Charles clasped his hands together and smiled. “Let's
keep it that way.”
“He'll
be speaking now,” Brainwave said. “Professor Portal, if you'd be
so kind...?”
Professor
Portal opened a small crack in space and they all crowded around it.
It offered an overhead view of an opulent club, men and women in fine
clothing all facing a podium at the front of the room where Senator
Alan was beginning a speech.
“My
friends,” he began, “humans and Metahumans. Thank you for
coming.” Even at this distance Nucleon could see that Alan was
unnerved. “We are gathered here tonight to show our solidarity and
unity in this war. Our resolve is strong, our cause is right, and we
will prevail.”
“Get
to it,” Brainwave muttered as the crowd clapped.
“That
said, I have done some...soul searching. And I have determined that
the proposals I made earlier were made in haste.” A brief pause.
“Together we can find another way to win. A better way. But make
no mistake, we will win,” he said loudly over the sounds of shock
and surprise from the crowd.
“Close
it,” Nucleon said. “I've seen enough. So,” he said, turning
to Charles. “What is our next move?”
“We'll
lay low for a bit,” Charles said. “We'll let Alan play his part
and let the politicians and media swarm all over him. Then we'll
make a strike and make sure Alan says nothing against us.”
Nucleon
nodded. Despite the uncertainties in this war, despite all his
reservations, he knew this was right. This would work. It had to.
retreat from is fine. retreat away is redundant.
ReplyDeletethis chapter is okay, but it kind of comes out of nowhere, has more parallels to the senator Mystique impersonates from the first x-men movie than I'd like, and feels like it's just marching the plot along. Nucleon has never been my favorite narrator. I feel like he has no fire when we're in his head.
I was concerned that this chapter was sort of flat. I realized that I'm not very good at writing negotiations. I'm not really sure what to do here, as I can't think of anything for Alan to use against Nucleon (yet, of course. Alan eventually introduces the Omegamen).
DeleteYeah, Senator Alan is a lot like Senator Kelly, but I hoped to differentiate them by having Alan be all about using Metahumans like weapons and regulating them instead of just killing them outright.
Do you have any suggestions to liven Nucleon up? I rather like him, but I can understand your critique.
Alan is distinct enough, I think, but he should be blustery-er and nastier in this part. Nucleon represents everything he hates and fears about Metahumans, and he seems brave in that piggish, privileged way rich people have, so I can see him sticking his neck out just to be rude and awful.
ReplyDeleteIt's not like Alan created the Omegamen or had the idea, though, right? That's Lynch's plan. Why would Alan announcing it have anything to do with him, beside the fact that he's saying words and supports it?
My suggestion for Nucleon is to look at other revolutionary figures and the atmospheres they cultivated. Castro was famously fiery and longwinded, Stalin didn't speak much and often used cryptic wording to make himself seem remote and mysterious. I think it's just that Nucleon doesn't have enough defining traits.