New content! This one comes after the chapter where Evermind reprimands Ghost. I borrowed a lot of stuff from Chapter 15 with some new stuff at the end.
In the edited Chapter 8, Nucleon and Charles briefly talk about planning an attack on Houston...so the mentions of that at the beginning of this aren't totally out of left field.
In the edited Chapter 8, Nucleon and Charles briefly talk about planning an attack on Houston...so the mentions of that at the beginning of this aren't totally out of left field.
Not sure if this is a good direction to take the story...I'll tell you what my tentative plans are after you read the chapter.
Chapter
11:
“The
exact origin of the Metahuman is unknown. From the time and place of
the first recorded Metahumans – beginning in Japan in 1946 – it
can be surmised that high levels of radiation initially led to the
creation of superpowers in normal human beings. If this is indeed
the cause, it is still unknown how this phenomena became a worldwide
one and how abilities are passed on.”
-Summary
of analysis of metahuman history and abilities, by Gold and Morris,
et al, 1983.
“Can you believe it?”
Hothead plucked the cigarette from his mouth. “Nucleon blows up
half of Houston and there's nothing we can do.” He strolled down
Lexington Ave with Speedster, head bowed low.
“I think you're exaggerating,”
Speedster said. For once he was keeping pace with Hothead and not
doing anything distracting. Normally Speedster would be dancing on
the spot, twiddling his thumbs or slapping his hands against his
thighs in a rhythm so fast that the sound became one blurring note.
Sometimes he would run a lap around Manhattan before Hothead realized
he was gone. Speedster argued that it made no difference; he was
gone for maybe three seconds, long enough to keep himself from going
stir-crazy, but Hothead still felt offended. Any sympathy he might
have once had for Speedster's conditions had long since evaporated.
He'd stopped caring about how hard it was for Speedster to lay still
long enough to sleep at night, or how much food he had to eat and
nutrient injections he needed to fill his bottomless stomach and fuel
his ceaseless metabolism. Now there was only irritation.
“Okay, a little. The point
still stands.” Hothead jabbed the air with his cigarette to
emphasize his point. “Nucleon and his crew get into the city,
sabotage a factory and the Rough Riders aren't there to respond.
What the hell.” He clamped back down on his cigarette and stuck
his hands into his utility belt. As his uniform lacked pockets, it
was the next best thing he could do.
“It's too late to do anything
about it, really,” said Speedster.
“You think that's an excuse?
Things are happening out there and we can't get anything done. We're
losing. And we're stuck here unable to do much of anything.”
“Looking for some action, eh?”
Speedster grinned, and his smile grew even wider when he waved to
some people across the street who called out to him, screaming and
waving. “One sec,” he muttered, and ran across the street, right
through traffic. Hothead leaned against a nearby building, smoking
and rolling his eyes as he watched Speedster blab with the excited
fans. Tourists, likely. New Yorkers were mostly used to seeing the
Guardians out and about in their flashy white-and-blue uniforms.
Speedster struck a dramatic pose. Cameras flashed. Hothead flicked
the his cigarette butt away and fished the carton out of his utility
belt. He shook it, but all that came out were a few lonely flakes of
tobacco.
“Damn.”
Speedster returned, still
smiling. “College girls. Get this; they say I'm their favorite
superhero.” He raised his eyebrows, as though expecting Hothead to
say something in return.
“I need more ciggs. Come with
me.”
“Ever tried to quit?” Speedster asked as Hothead tossed the
Marlboro carton over his shoulder. Hothead smacked his lips and
snapped his fingers. He felt the oxygen slip between his thumb and
middle finger and superheat in an instant. A tongue of flame
flickered between his fingers before being blown out by the breeze.
The gesture felt useless without a cigarette to light, but it was
something to do.
“Once,” he said, “after Evermind pulled me into the Guardians.”
“After the whole Cinder thing,” Speedster added.
“Yeah. After that.” The bad times. Looking back on it, Hothead
was not sure why he'd teamed up with Cinder. Theft and arson had
seemed like a much better career path when he was twenty-two, and no
one could do it better than her. It had taken a solid beating by the
Guardians and the threat of prison to make him see straight.
Superhero work wasn't bad. Better than the uncertainty of high-risk
bank jobs. Maybe Cinder would have agreed, if she hadn't fled before
the battle was over. Doubtful, though. Bitch was crazy enough.
“Evermind figured I should stop smoking. Public image and all that
crap. I told her I'd just smoke away from the cameras, but we both
knew that wasn't going to happen. So I eventually went cold turkey
and it lasted for a year.” Hothead made another lick of flame with
his fingers and made the fire dance between his fingers in a golden
helix. Some of the people on the street stopped to watch him, and
other whipped out their cell phones to snap pictures of the two
heroes, but Hothead ignored them. “Then there was that one battle
with General Fissure. Hardest fight of my life. Ever tried to save
orphans while fighting someone?” Hothead pressed a hand to his
forehead and ran it down his face. It was not a pleasant memory.
“Spent a week in intensive care afterwords. Broken arm and ribs.
And I needed something
other than the crossword to do while I was sitting around all day.
So I took up smoking again and damn Evermind for trying to make me
stop.”
“Why didn't she make
you stop?” Speedster asked. “You know...” He wiggled his
fingers around the region of his temple and mimed a serious
expression, brows drawn together and lips pursed in a fair impression
of Evermind. “Mind control?”
Hothead snorted. Smoke and
sparks billowed out of his nostrils. The air caught in his throat
and he hawked up a glob of phlegm, spitting into the gutters. “You
think she didn't try? She did. Rewired my brain to make me never
want them again, or made me forget I'd started again. All kinds of
crap. Never worked.”
“Why not?”
“Eh, she explained it to me once. Something about pathways in the
brain. My body was too used to the chemical addiction that no amount
of mind control would fix it. So I eventually told her to stay out
of my head and let me smoke as much as I wanted. Hasn't bothered me
since.”
Speedster hemmed and hawed.
“Hmm. I wonder if she could fix anyone else? Ghost is kind of
whiny.”
“Lay off the kid,” Hothead said. “He's a teenager. He'll grow
out of it. And I think Evermind has other things to think about than
making her team perfect.”
“I dunno,” said Speedster. “One time she told me-”
Hothead ignored him. The rattle
and roar of evening traffic drowned out Speedster. He was hard to
ignore, generally, but Hothead had a lot of practice.
“Here,” said Hothead, pointing to a Dwayne Reid on the corner.
The inside of the store was
crowded for a Thursday afternoon. He ignored the people around him
and went straight to the counter. The girl at the register couldn't
have been older than eighteen. Her eyes lit up when she looked up at
her customer, a huge smile spreading across her face. “You're
Hothead!” she gushed.
“Yeah, it's me,” he agreed. He knew people would be watching
him, but it was no concern to him. Speedster, he was sure, would be
soaking up the attention. “Pack of Marlboro Special Blends,” he
said as he reached into his utility belt, pulled out his Guardians ID
Card and flipped it onto the counter. “Put it on the card.”
The girl reached behind her for
the pack of cigarettes, eyes still locked onto Hothead. She acted
like she'd never seen a Metahuman before. With deliberate motions
she placed the pack on the counter and picked up Hothead's card,
turning it over to study the front. Hothead knew she was looking at
the tiny photo on the ID. It was an old picture, from just a year
after joining the Guardians. Cinder had still been at large then.
An awful photo, really.
“You don't have to pay for this,” the girl said finally.
“Just put it on the card,” he said. “It's not a big deal.”
“Please,” she said, “I insist.”
“It's not that expensive. Just swipe the card, kid.”
She did, but it was with some
reluctance. She passed the card back to Hothead with trembling
fingers. “Thanks,” Hothead said as he took the carton in one
hand and plucked the card from her fingers with the other. He
slipped both into his utility belt and called out to Speedster, “Come
on.” Speedster tore himself away from the newsstand with some
reluctance.
“I was reading,” he said.
“Good for you.” Hothead lit
up. He vaguely wondered if it was more likely for him to die in
combat or succumb to lung cancer.
“Opinion on the war's pretty
split. More than you might think. Lots of people support Nucleon.
Important people.”
“Well, then we'll just have to
beat him sooner, before more people decide they like his ideas.”
They made their way back to Park
Avenue and into Headquarters. Olivia greeted them in the lobby, and
the two heroes stood together in silence during the elevator ride up
to the eleventh floor.
“You're just in time,”
Evermind said as they stepped into the living space. “Senate
hearings.” She waved them over to the TV.
“Oooh. C-SPAN. My favorite.”
Hothead sat on the couch next to Evermind. “What's going on?”
“Issues relevant to the war.
They've got the DMR present.”
“Thrilling.” Speedster
watched with a fair attempt at feigning interest. Ghost sat curled
up in a chair with his copy of Super America. Brick stood in
the corner, arms crossed.
“So what's going on?”
Speedster asked.
Without looking up, Ghost
whispered, “Shhh.”
The politicians on screen
yammered on. Pointless drivel. Majesticus took the podium at one
point, and spoke for a few minutes. “Regardless of what this group
of Metahumans has done, it does not reflect upon us as a community.
All of us, all agents of the Metahuman Police Act, are devoted to
ending this conflict and restoring order. The actions of these
rebels should not condone us all. We stand united in our pursuit of
peace and justice.” Applause, applause. There was a small moment
as Majesticus removed his glasses and tucked them back in his jacket
where Hothead thought he saw the old hero sigh.
Senator Spencer Alan swaggered up
to the podium, and after much adjusting of his tie and smiling like
an obese snake, he began his bit. Evermind leaned in closer.
“Senators. Fellow Americans,”
he intoned.
“Prick,” Ghost muttered.
“We are all of us threatened by
Nucleon. While we may have praised the actions of this man in the
past, in the present we can only condemn him as a terrorist. I don't
know about you, but I for one will not negotiate with terrorists.
And I will never negotiate with a Metahuman terrorist!”
“What's he doing?” asked
Brick over the sound of applause. Evermind waved a hand at him to
silence him.
“The people of Florida have
seen firsthand the benefits of a strong MPA. And we have seen what
can come when powerful Metahumans are given free reign.” Beside
Hothead, Evermind clenched her fist. “He cannot have what he so
unreasonably demands. He insists upon being unchecked and free. I
don't know about you, but I won't let a man who's a walking atom bomb
walk free among us!”
Hothead watched as the majority
of those present in the senate rose clapping to their feet. It was
one thing to oppose Nucleon, but Senator Alan was whipping people
into a frenzy. He glanced around the common room, but his teammates
all watched the screen in rapt silence.
“My deepest condolences go out
to the people of Texas. They lost good people. Innocent people who
had nothing to do with this war, but who Nucleon decided needed to
suffer for his vision. I've spoken with Secretary Chapman and the
rest of the DMR, and the truth is plain: we don't have enough forces
to combat this menace. Not enough policemen. Not enough armed
forces. We lack in intelligence. And we lack superheroes that we
can rally behind and depend on!
“The solution, then, is clear.
We need more manpower. We need people with the abilities to combat
Nucleon and his terrorists. And there are many in the country who
were given opportunities outside of the hero program by none other
than Nucleon.”
Hothead felt the breath catch in
his throat. The hammer was about to fall.
“Let us roll back the changes
to our MPA that Nucleon himself put in place. Why should we accept
changes to our laws made by an enemy of the state? Let us go back
the model we know works, to what President Eisenhower envisioned in
1959. Any Metahuman who has been given a state-sanctioned position
outside of the superhero program should be brought in. Any hero on
leave shall be called in for active duty. We outnumber Nucleon, and
we will beat him. This will not be a day of defeat for America. We
will not have another Houston. Not again. With a stronger MPA we
can ensure the safety of all citizens, human and Metahuman!”
Thunderous applause greeted his
statement, but the Guardians all remained silent.
“He can't,” said Ghost. “He
can't do that. That's literally the most illegal thing I've ever
heard.”
“He won't get the support for
it,” Brick said.
Hothead snorted. “Don't kid
yourself. Look at them.” He gestured to the screen. Standing
ovation. “They love it. Alan's going to roll back everything.
Whatever it takes to win. And they'll all go along with it.”
“They can't,” said Ghost, his
voice small.
“No, they will. And I bet a
lot of registered heroes will go along with it, too. Anything to
win. Look, I'm sorry, kid, but that's how it is,” he said as Ghost
stood and stormed out of the room. “It is,” he said with a
shrug. Evermind did not respond, but continued to watch with a
tight-lipped intensity. “Hey. Can we do anything about this?”
he asked her.
“I'm not sure,” she said.
She didn't look at Hothead. “Perhaps not. But we may not want to
do anything about it.”
“What?”
“These changes that Alan
proposes,” Evermind said, gesturing to the screen, “can't be
permanent. They'll go through, but they won't last. And they may
help us for the time being.”
“I really don't think that's
the case,” Brick said. He came forward and crouched down behind
the couch so he was closer to Evermind and Hothead. “You know
Alan's stance. Once he implements these changes he and everyone else
will be too comfortable with them to change them back.”
“I don't think so. And if
we're not doing everything we can to win this, then what are
we doing? Losing to Nucleon is not an option.”
“So, what,” said Hothead,
“we're going to rewind progress to win?” He glanced back to
Speedster, looking for backup, but Speedster had left. Typical.
“You're exaggerating,”
Evermind said.
“No, I really don't think I
am.”
“It's pointless to speculate
now, anyway.” Evermind unfolded herself from the couch and stood.
“You don't really feel that
way, do you?” Brick asked her, his voice low. Evermind left the
room. Her silence and the determined set of her walk was all the
answer Hothead needed. “She can't be okay with this,” Brick said
to Hothead.
“I have no idea what she
thinks,” he muttered, and slumped deeper into the couch. It didn't
make a difference to Hothead now. The only thing that had saved him
from prison was Evermind's kindness. And he didn't mind. He was
good at what he did, he liked to think. So why did it matter to him?
“She doesn't know what she's
talking about,” Hothead said, more to himself than to Brick.
“Doesn't know.”
Wait, nobody has even GUESSED that this shit is genetic? The world's top scientists are bamboozled by the idea of a man who can shoot fire having a son who shoots fire?
ReplyDelete*blurred/blended note.
“You think that's an excuse? Things are happening out there and we can't get anything done. We're losing. And we're stuck here unable to do much of anything.” Irritatingly redundant.
"Cigs" and "I need cigs" is fine.
"condone" is misused. As in, completely.
Evermind is well-characterized here, but I want more of Hothead's thoughts after the chapter's beginning (which is very good) and where's Brick? Without rereading I don't even remember if he's in the room (I think he is, he just says nothing that makes an impression).